Correct my advertising post please :)

Hey !

I want to post a message on my facebook account about a new set of creation that i make, but I'm not sure it's really correct :

""Hello FB friends !

I need your help

Could you support a fresh new artist ( ME ) !?!

Come discover my new creation of original T-shirts, bags and stuff ! (In exclusive, FB first post )
: link

I'm a young designer who love fashion and photography, so please comment and share if you like my work (or if you don't ^^ )

P.S : If you share this post, you got a chance to win 2 t-shirt for free

Feel free to contact me about anything, like if you love a design and want more product with it or anything !

Thank you a lot !""

Well that's it, thank you for your help