correct motivation letter

hello
I really need some one to check my motivation letter as soon as possibel

Elajaili -Eman salem
...............Bloor st - Toronto - ON
Canada -................
February 1st , 2013
Shari Sekel
Gradate program director
Brock University
............Ave -. st. Catharines ,Ontario
Canada .........
Dear Mrs: Shari
I am writing to emphasis my desire to applying for the Goodman international master of Accountancy program on August 2013 at your esteemed university. After considering your website I feel that I keen on having the Opportunity to take place on your programs to gain broad background in accounting knowledge Fortunately, goodman school of business likely to have a suitable and perfect courses to perform my further goals of study as well as career in future .
I realize the highly competitive demands of the program, but I have the ability, ambition and motivation to exceed the requirements and to excel at the university. I am eager to gain new experiences and the advantage of translate my skills and educate into career success more over to contribute significantly in the improving my family business as as a successful accountant. therefore I would be very proud if I could be one of received the admission for this program. and become a part of Brock university's intimate and international Community.
I graduated from misurata university , Libya with a bachelor’s degree in accounting in spring 2007, since that I had became interest in advancing my education that shortly start studding for the master degree at the high studies academy in Libya and I had terminated the curriculums as a part of high degree requirement , unfortunately I did had the chance to work on my project due to the Regrettable event that tack place recently in my home, How over it makes me more insist to not only pursue a career in a field of accounting at my local company also to get a deeper knowledge of accounting and learning how to understand and explain in detail the international financial reporting and accounting standards due to gaining specialized skills by attending interactive lectures, seminars and work experience placement
. Last but not least, giving my successful history on study path I can say that I am sure I will match all the credentials and will be able to maintain high standards at your university
I look forward to hearing from you in the near future regarding the success of my application
Yours faithfully
Eman salem Elajaili