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Gadget Hackwrench Posted 18 years ago
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0This is introduction for the poster, please check mistakes in it! I'm trying to improve my English and your remarks will be very useful for me!02br
00"Coral reefs are very interesting marine communities. Their biodiversity is formed under the influence of different biotic and abiotic factors, depending on distance to the coast, current system, tidal amplitude etc.02br
00All organisms on the coral reef take part in its functioning. Coral fishes also an extremely important component of such processes. Some of them use holes in coral like a shelter, other take animals from coral surface or feeding by tissue of coral.02br
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00Small cryptobenthic fishes play very special role in functioning of coral community. It’s well known, that one of the most important dangers for coral reef is overfishing. Extinction of some fish species due to overfishing, depresses all coral community. It is a question not only of large conspicuous members of the reef fish community, but also about the tiny species which are of interest for 01b00aquarists02b00 (is it right word for people who have aquariums at home, who love this activity?).02br
00Obviously, it is necessary to study diet of these small fishes to understand their potential role as a functional group in the trophodynamics of a coral reef ecosystem.02br
00There are very many methods of studying of fish feeding. But specialists can’t decide which method is better. In our opinion the most effective measures are numerical and qualitative analysis of contents of their digestive tract. 02br
00The difficulties involved with accurately sampling and identifying small fishes and contents of their intestine explain the insufficient knowledge of their feeding. These contents are usually presented by remains of small crustaceans and other invertebrates. It is very difficult to determinate them, because they are half-digested."02br
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00Thanks a lot! 050010id1
  

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0Hello 05000 I tried to give it a more scientific form, but I hope that some native speakers can check the grammar again. This is my try:02br
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00"Coral reefs are very interesting marine communities. 01b00Their biodiversity is formed under the influence of different biotic and abiotic factors,02b00 01span00
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0Francesca, thank you very much for your comments! I see that I lost many articles and sometimes my language not so scientific, but I hope to study to write scientific papers in right way! Thank you!!! 050010id1

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