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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Hi,
I tried to find out an error in each sentence and then corrected them. However, I am not sure it is right or wrong. I would like to receive your help.
1. Nguyen is everything we'd ever want in a man-brilliant, fun and attractive.
I think "everything" is wrong and it should be changed into 'the one"
2. A doctor with profession, this is his first pleasure trip into writing for the theatre.
In this sentence I think " with profession " should be written "with his profession".
3. Trung was a youthful sailor on his first sea excursion.
I think "on" is wrong, we should write "in".
I learn more from your comment. Thank you a lot.
Tran Ha.
I tried to find out an error in each sentence and then corrected them. However, I am not sure it is right or wrong. I would like to receive your help.
1. Nguyen is everything we'd ever want in a man-brilliant, fun and attractive.
I think "everything" is wrong and it should be changed into 'the one"
2. A doctor with profession, this is his first pleasure trip into writing for the theatre.
In this sentence I think " with profession " should be written "with his profession".
3. Trung was a youthful sailor on his first sea excursion.
I think "on" is wrong, we should write "in".
I learn more from your comment. Thank you a lot.
Tran Ha.
Top answer
1. Nguyen is everything we'd ever want in a man - brilliant, fun and attractive. OK, though witty is better than fun .
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- Nguyen is everything we'd ever want in a man - brilliant, fun and attractive.
- OK, though witty is better than fun .
- 2.
- A doctor by profession , this is his first excursion into writing for the theatre.
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1. Nguyen is everything we'd ever want in a man - brilliant, fun and attractive.
OK, though witty is better than fun.
2. A doctor by profession, this is his first excursion into writing for the theatr
OK, though witty is better than fun.
2. A doctor by profession, this is his first excursion into writing for the theatr
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