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Rcteja Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Correct me plz.

After short gap two lovers met in a coffee shop.

girl: i want to tell you a truth.
boy: what's that? did u marry some one?
girl: no..
boy: oh..are you loving some one else?
girl: no no..
boy: you don't love me?
girl:no..
boy:then what?
girl: you are sadist number 1.
  

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Awful. Start again. Check your spelling and capitalization. Change the last line completely.
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ok..

After short gap two Lovers met in a coffee shop.

girl: I want to tell you a truth.
boy: What's that? Did u marry some one?
girl: No..
boy: Oh..are you loving some one else?
girl: No no..
boy: You don't love me?
girl:No..
boy:Then what?
girl: You are a big ****** .

Please correct me.

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girl: I want to tell you something.
boy: What's that? Are you married?
girl: No..
boy: Oh..Do you love someone else?
girl: No, no..
boy: You don't love me?
girl: No..
boy:Then what?
girl: You're always mean to me.
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