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Ravinath Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

correct me please

I am filling out a US VISA application form at this moment.
I want to give reasons for not being employed at this moment and below are my reason and expectation.
Native speakers, please correct my mistakes. thanks.

Immediately after my graduation, I joined university of X and worked as a temporary lecturer until the end of the 2015. I will continue my studies in the US for next 6 years and I will join academia in my country when I return home.

(I want to say I will be joining one of the universities in my country after I return )
  

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Immediately after graduation, I worked at the university of X as a temporary lecturer until the end of 2015. I would like to continue my studies in the US for next 6 years. After I earn a PhD in International Relations , I plan to return home to work in academia.

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  • Immediately after graduation, I worked at the university of X as a temporary lecturer until the end of 2015.
  • I would like to continue my studies in the US for next 6 years.
  • After I earn a PhD in International Relations , I plan to return home to work in academia.
  • Put your specific details in place of the underlined text.
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Immediately after graduation, I worked at the university of X as a temporary lecturer until the end of 2015. I would like to continue my studies in the US for next 6 years. After I earn a PhD in International Relations, I plan to return home to work in academia.

Put your specific details in place of the underlined text.
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