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AliaAhmad Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
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My Free Time
I have a lot of free time. I always spend my free time with my mother and brother. I like to swim, paint and run in my free time. I often spend most of my free time at the park. It is a very calm and beautiful place. Free time is important to me because it makes me relax and enjoy my day.
I have a lot of free time. I always spend my free time with my mother and brother. I like to swim, paint and run in my free time. I often spend most of my free time at the park. It is a very calm and beautiful place. Free time is important to me because it makes me relax and enjoy my day.
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I often spend most of my free time at the park, which is a very calm and beautiful place. Free time is important to me because it helps me to relax and to enjoy my day.
- I often spend most of my free time at the park, which is a very calm and beautiful place.
- Free time is important to me because it helps me to relax and to enjoy my day.
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I often spend most of my free time at the park, which is a very calm and beautiful place.
Free time is important to me because it helps me to relax and to enjoy my day.
Free time is important to me because it helps me to relax and to enjoy my day.
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Repeating the phrase "free time" four times makes your paragraph a bit stilted.
Do your your mother and brother always swim, paint, run, and go to the park with you?
You say you "always" send your free time with them, but then you say other things you like to do with your time.
Do your your mother and brother always swim, paint, run, and go to the park with you?
You say you "always" send your free time with them, but then you say other things you like to do with your time.
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