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Spathipati Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

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Hi Friends,
i want to tell/write below words with a stylish, how to say

"I'm not celebrating my birthday because of recent flood victms,so iam giving my birthday money to their people"
  

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In lieu of presents, I kindly request that you direct your generosity to XXXX organization/relief fund. It is better to request that the would-be present givers send money directly to the organization.

  • In lieu of presents, I kindly request that you direct your generosity to XXXX organization/relief fund.
  • It is better to request that the would-be present givers send money directly to the organization.
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In lieu of presents, I kindly request that you direct your generosity to XXXX organization/relief fund.

It is better to request that the would-be present givers send money directly to the organization.
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There are many ways to express the same thought. This is mine.

I am not going to celebrate my birthday this year because many are suffering from the recent flood. I want to donate the money for my birthday celebration to the relief effort.

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