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Crespo Posted 18 years ago
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Correct me

Please correct the following statement

"Apart form career goals and achievements, I would like to be a Philanthropist and be involved in humanitarian services in order to affect people's lives positively and to contribute to the development of my immediate environment."

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Commendable ambition, but I would not use "philanthropist" in this statement. "

  • Commendable ambition, but I would not use "philanthropist" in this statement.
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Commendable ambition, but I would not use "philanthropist" in this statement. "I would like to be involved......"

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