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Dear writers,

Found this website through Google while searching for "business letters oil products". I was looking if you could correct and amend attached letter. Letter have been translated from russian to english, therefore some meaning of the text can be omitted or deleted.
Any suggestions or improvments to the letter are welcome.

P.S. If there is anybody who writes letters for living, please email.

Thanks for looking
James

LETTERS IN ENGLISH

Currently, Europe and the U.S. is experiencing a great need in petroleum products from Russia. Never Gazprom and other oil-producing Russian companies are not looking for a buyer. Buyers themselves are claimed to them, providing a complete package of documents and await when The Company will consider and allocate their volumes.

Therefore, this scheme has been proposed to bypass the bureaucracy.

Mediators (Mandatery), with whom I talk, cannot provide letter from the Purchaser specifying the number of the Treaty on the reception and storage facilities in Europe, which belong to Russia.
The Seller offers the Buyer to confirm the presence of the Treaty on the reception and deposited in the vaults in Europe, owned by Russia. All Western Mandatery send us agreement with repositories of Western countries and other dregs!

Contract warehousing western countries is not needed as diz.top. is
Russian stores in Europe and therefore require agreement with the Russian stores.
Therefore, the conditions of the Seller remains the same. If you have direct access to Western Buyers, let's continue to work to find a buyer.

Work between the Buyer and the Seller will be built when the following conditioins are met:


  1. Letter to the firm. Blank, it indicates the number of Contract for the reception and storage room and storage (it there a few) in the stores belonging to Russia.

  1. If the buyer does not have a direct contract with these stores, then possible option of working through a company that has such an agreement.

  1. In this case the buyer in his letter indicates the full name this company, contract number and the number of storage and attached to it first, third and last sheet of the Treaty concluded between them (Sat.Contract).

  1. Seller, having received such a letter, send to Seller Transactions Procedure.

  1. With the consent of the Buyer to work on this procedure, among them is a personal meeting in Moscow to sign a contract.

  1. Price and Discount will be determined at this meeting.

  1. Volume Deese. top. To 1 (one) million tons per month, annual contract.
Make no mistake about the essence of the proposal. Seller is willing to conclude Contract with a buyer who has a contract to receive and store of diesel in storage facilities in Europe belonging to the Russian Federation. If The buyer does not have a direct contract, ability to work through the Company, which has this Treaty. In this case, buyer must sign the Agreement for acceptance and deposited with the company (sub contract).
From the above we must have letter from the Buyer (LOI), in which must include:


  1. In the case where the Buyer has a direct contract for the reception and storage,
    letter in which the number of the Treaty and the number of stores.


  2. In the case where the Buyer has an agreement with the Company (which has
    direct contract to the reception and storage), a letter which indicates the full
    Company name, number of direct contract number storage, and
    also attached to the letter first, third and last sheet of the Agreement between the
    Buyer and the Company.


  3. The buyer becomes the owner of the Contract in accordance with the acquired
    of being in hranilischax.


  4. Purchaser will enter into a contract with one of the oil
    companies in Russia.


  5. Diesel volume to 1 (one) million tons per month, annual contract.


  6. Price and the discount will be discussed at a meeting of buyer and seller.

Please note, the seller does not insist on the full package of documents (this time says a lot). Once again The buyer, the FOB and SPOT are unacceptable to Seller, as the subscripts. top
sold in stores in Russia. That's why it needed from the Buyer, the Agreement on
reception and storage (or Sub. Agreement ") with storage Russia in Europe.

Ready to answer any questions.

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