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Sania Yasin Fudda Posted 14 years ago
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I found my field trip an amazing trip. Our filed trip was very informative. On 13th January, our school took us to an igloo ice cream factory. All the classes were divided into groups. First, we were shown the processing area of how it is made, then packaging and after that they distributed everywhere. We went to the manufacturing area, and they showed us a short movie about the whole process of ice cream. Different people working in different areas, each work has different machines. Our field trip was very informative. Then all the groups played games in the garden. Everyone was well behaved. Our field trip was full of fun with friends. We ate lots n lots of ice cream, while sitting in the garden we had our lunch. Then our teacher played a quiz with us ,We answered so many questions. So many information was shared between students. After having all the fun, we sat in the van and came back to school. Everyone went to their homes. I shared all the information about a trip with my mom and dad and told them that it was a very useful and informative and knowledgeable trip.
  
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