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Some people think young mothers should not work. They should stay at home and take care of their children. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? State your opinion and support it with reasons and examples.
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I don't accept the idea that young mothers should not work and only take care of their children. I can provide several supporting arguments to explain my position to this matter.
In the first place, being a mother is not a punishment, it doesn't mean that you are oppressed by someone or something.
During a life every human has a possibility to do what they want and develop in spite of who they are. Beside, as human(mother) needs experience and development in their career as the state needs experienced and developed people in its job. If every mother were unemployed hostess, the education and development index would go down in the whole world. Otherwise it would be a part of infraction of womens' rights.
Another key thing to remember, there're many single parents, poor families and different kind of people, whom financial possibilities are not enough for living wage. So, first of all what they truly need is job to earn money. By the way, poverty is the insoluble problem in the world, so foresaid fact helps humankind to avoid a piece of poorness.
To sum up, every mother had better have possibility to choose the best solution of their condition and make a free decision by their own way. Employed women can be a careful mommy as well as she can be a great worker.