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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Jay Gatsby was german . He was a wealthy gentelman with a caring sence . His family was from the Mid- West . All of the family but him had passed away . Gatsby had the fear that he would not ever get any friends . The feelings that he had was making it difficult for him . Everybody thought wrong abouyt Gatsby . No one wanted to be friends with Gatsby . He felt no one liked him now so how was it going to change ? He had money but did not think that would make anything different . If he talked no one would answer .
So one day Gatsy had someone invite Nick over to a party . Gatsby wanted to see what would happen ? He was very much in shock that Nick had shown up . He , Gatsby does not attent his own party's . For the reason that no one wants to communicate with him . Gatsy got happy when Nick showed . Nick was invited upstairs to Gatsbys office . As they got together Gatsby asked if it would be OK if they would meet for lunch the next day . Now Gatsby was a understanding person but had hard feelings when something happened . All along Gatsby wanted to see Daisy . So one day Gatsby had Nick invite Daisy over for tea . For a minute He thought Daisy is not going to show . Gatsby felt he had made a big mistake when it was just a few minutes past the time when she said she would be there she happened to show . As She showed Gatsby got happy .
Maybe Gatsby was a different nationality . Gatsby was a good person to get along with . He may have been from a different part of America but that does not make him a bad person just because of that . All Gatsby wanted is some friends . Some friends that would like him for who he was . The only thing back in this story they thought about money . If thry had it thats all they cared about .
The story of the great Gatsby is very interesting . As I read the chapter of Gatsby's top thing was looking for friends . When reading I could see Gatsby being truthful with everything he did.
  
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