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Musthakahmed1 Posted 17 years ago
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Hi salam,
As you know very well there share Market recession effected every country. You know, in our company there many employees asked to leave the job. Hence i don't know what is the market situation. Please disseminate it to all of your friends not leave present job ok

See you later, Bye bye
  

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Here is how I would rewrite your letter above: Hi salam, As you know, the current economic recession is effecting every country. At our company, there are employees who have asked to leaver their current jobs. I do not know the current job propects out there but I recommend that you stay in your current position.

— AliceW31

  • Here is how I would rewrite your letter above: Hi salam, As you know, the current economic recession is effecting every country.
  • At our company, there are employees who have asked to leaver their current jobs.
  • I do not know the current job propects out there but I recommend that you stay in your current position.
  • See you later, (Your name)
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Here is how I would rewrite your letter above:

Hi salam,
As you know, the current economic recession is effecting every country. At our company, there are employees who have asked to leaver their current jobs. I do not know the current job propects out there but I recommend that you stay in your current position.

See you later,
(Your name)
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HI, Alice
I would like to apply for job. Kindly let me how to apply, if i see any job vacany in the new paper. eg: Times Job new paper. Please reply to me immediately
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