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PRINCESS1805 Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Correct Grammar?

May I know if below sentence has correct grammar?

We would like to follow-up the status of the attached summary of our overdue receivables from .... To date we already incurred ...m or equivalent to ...% overdue of the total receivables.
Please see below screenshot for your quick reference.
Looking forward for your soonest feedback.

Sincerely
  

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I suggest the following changes: We would like to follow-up on the status of the attached summary of our overdue receivables from .... % overdue of the total receivables . Please see below t he screenshot below for your quick reference.

— Doctor D

  • I suggest the following changes: We would like to follow-up on the status of the attached summary of our overdue receivables from ....
  • % overdue of the total receivables .
  • Please see below t he screenshot below for your quick reference.
  • Looking forward for your soonest feedback earliest reply .
  • m" refers to a monetary amount.
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I suggest the following changes:

We would like to follow-up on the status of the attached summary of our overdue receivables from .... To date we already incurred ...m in overdue receivables or which is equivalent to ...% overdue of the total receivables.
Please see below the screenshot below for you
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PRINCESS1805 May I know if below sentence has correct grammar?
We would like to follow-up the.... The bolded part is wrong!

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You're right sir that's what m pertains to. I don't want to disclose the figure.
Thank you for your suggestion.
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Hello,
May I know what is the right word if follow-up is wrong?

thanks
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The verb should not be hyphenated ('on' is fine in my book):

We would like to follow up on the status...
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Thank you Mister Micawber Emotion: smile
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follow-up the status This phrase sounds poor to me. It is weak and unclear business jargon. I know you don't want to say bluntly When are we going to get paid?, but I suggest
eg Please advise us of the status of our overdue receivables from .... A summary is attached. etc, etc.
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You're right Mr. Clive. I'm just trying to be polite to our client.
Thank you for your suggestion Emotion: smile
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