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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Dear diary,
i entered my bedroom and sat on my comfy bed . the surounding was so dark and i could even hear a pin drop . i jabbed some buttons on my handphone and...
" ohmygod! this is stupid! " i pouted, with my icky face .
it written there : 6:00 am .
helloooo?! it is holidays now! why must i have to wake up so early?! it was all because of YOU, stupid period ! Hell, my best friend paid a visit on me just this morning, much to my chagrin - but why must it have to be today ? i need to attend a meeting with YanLin later!
the pain was deplorable and defied description . well, no one ever says being a woman is easy .
Just now, i was awaken by the heinous pain . i can't sleep! so i've decided to get a medicine instead of lying on the bed and continue suffering .
" Mummy, mummy, i want to eat medicine, i am having period pain " i beated, really annoyed .
" Ponstan " mom mumbled , with two eyes still closing .
" okay, thanks! " i replied .
then, i fished for the medicine in the refrigerator . you know, it is never easy to find a medicine in MY refrigerator, it is chock-a-block with billions types of medicine . thanks to mom .
i would scarcely have awaken that early just to post a diary and do some readings . it was a waste for not indulging myself in the land of Nod and rejuvenate like other people now .
nah, that was the flip side, but at least i could get the chance to write to you diary .
it has been a long time, for me . and you are getting drabber .
i am resposible to your drabness , duh .
i'd planted myself on the upholstery infront of the television, but it was not on . diary, you know me .
when there is too much time to waste, books are always on my hand .
well, i did some reading on the book i've bought two years ago, The Secrets of Nur Amalina's Success (i've translated it , it is in BM)
woah, she is the real wunderkind, and a crazypot too .
her life is all about studies, this is too boring .
Li Chin might keen in this, yucky! not me .
nahh, maybe sometimes, i might be acting like a nerd but i do enjoy my life
the medicine really drained me and it left me in a frazzled . alright, time to sleep now .
Dear diary,
i entered my bedroom and sat on my comfy bed . the surounding was so dark and i could even hear a pin drop . i jabbed some buttons on my handphone and...
" ohmygod! this is stupid! " i pouted, with my icky face .
it written there : 6:00 am .
helloooo?! it is holidays now! why must i have to wake up so early?! it was all because of YOU, stupid period ! Hell, my best friend paid a visit on me just this morning, much to my chagrin - but why must it have to be today ? i need to attend a meeting with YanLin later!
the pain was deplorable and defied description . well, no one ever says being a woman is easy .
Just now, i was awaken by the heinous pain . i can't sleep! so i've decided to get a medicine instead of lying on the bed and continue suffering .
" Mummy, mummy, i want to eat medicine, i am having period pain " i beated, really annoyed .
" Ponstan " mom mumbled , with two eyes still closing .
" okay, thanks! " i replied .
then, i fished for the medicine in the refrigerator . you know, it is never easy to find a medicine in MY refrigerator, it is chock-a-block with billions types of medicine . thanks to mom .
i would scarcely have awaken that early just to post a diary and do some readings . it was a waste for not indulging myself in the land of Nod and rejuvenate like other people now .
nah, that was the flip side, but at least i could get the chance to write to you diary .
it has been a long time, for me . and you are getting drabber .
i am resposible to your drabness , duh .
i'd planted myself on the upholstery infront of the television, but it was not on . diary, you know me .
when there is too much time to waste, books are always on my hand .
well, i did some reading on the book i've bought two years ago, The Secrets of Nur Amalina's Success (i've translated it , it is in BM)
woah, she is the real wunderkind, and a crazypot too .
her life is all about studies, this is too boring .
Li Chin might keen in this, yucky! not me .
nahh, maybe sometimes, i might be acting like a nerd but i do enjoy my life
the medicine really drained me and it left me in a frazzled . alright, time to sleep now .
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Anonymous Please check this for me, thanks (: Dear diary, i entered my bedroom and sat on my comfy bed . the surounding was so dark and i could even hear a pin drop . i jabbed some buttons on my handphone and...
- Anonymous Please check this for me, thanks (: Dear diary, i entered my bedroom and sat on my comfy bed .
- the surounding was so dark and i could even hear a pin drop .
- i jabbed some buttons on my handphone and...
- " ohmygod!
- this is stupid!
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AnonymousPlease check this for me, thanks (:
Dear diary,
i entered my bedroom and sat on my comfy bed . the surounding was so dark and i could even hear a pin drop . i jabbed some buttons on my handphone and...
" ohmygod! this is stupid! " i pouted, with my icky face .
it written there : 6:00 am .
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