Correct for me an applicant
Hi teacher, iam struggling to write an accurate applicant. Could you take a look and help me in correcting it. this job plays an important role in our lives because it could bring a bit of wage, which help me maintain my study.
Thanks for your consideration
Tr?n Quang Vi?t
3220,HH3C, Hà N?i
M:0973281777
E:Email Removed
3rd, March,2017
Miss Hoàng H?i Y?n
Family English Center
2720,HH3B, Hà n?i
Dear Miss Yen
Apply to: Teacher position
Iam writing in regards to the position of Teacher currently advertised on Facebook website. The particular skills and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a lot
I have been doing a course in English Civil Engineering at National University of Civil Engineering. Iam a third year student. I have worked as tutor majoring in Math and English since I was a first year student, therefore I have an experience in giving the lesson and having a good comunicating skill with students and student ‘s parents as well.
In addition, iam a leader of the volunterring organization in Ha Noi, there fore I could be adept in presentation in front of many people. Besides, I have enjoyed children ‘s summer art camps twice, I have been responsible for drawing the game and being instructor of group, such those things could help me to understand clearly about the children ‘s moral and spritual development. Lastly, iam living in proximity of Center, HH3B Tower, that could be a head start on helping me to have a long-term work.
As my years of students and experience make me feel confident that I get the job done effciently. I believe I can contribute by developing all skills and experience I have learned and gained during the past 3years to your company.I hereby declare that the above information furnished by me is accurate and true to the best of my knowledge and belief.
These are the qualities, experience that you are looking for this position. Please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions. Thank you for your consideration
Yours sincerely
Tran Quang Viet
Top answer
I highlighted the words that have errors and also made comments in italics. Dear Miss Yen Apply to: Teacher position Iam writing in regards to the position of T eacher currently advertised on Facebook website. The particular skills and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a lot (missing punctuation) I have been doing a course in English Civil Engineering at National University of Civil Engineering.
- I highlighted the words that have errors and also made comments in italics.
- Dear Miss Yen Apply to: Teacher position Iam writing in regards to the position of T eacher currently advertised on Facebook website.
- The particular skills and requirements listed in your advertisement interest me a lot (missing punctuation) I have been doing a course in English Civil Engineering at National University of Civil Engineering.
- Iam a third year student.
- ) since I was a first year student, therefore I have an experience in giving the lesson and having a good comunicating skill with students and studen t ‘s parents as well.
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I highlighted the words that have errors and also made comments in italics.
Dear Miss Yen
Apply to: Teacher position
Iam writing in regards to the position of Teacher currently advertised on Facebook website. The particular skills and requirements listed in your advertisement intere
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