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Swansong Posted 22 years ago
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http://www.honda.co.jp/manual/stream/2004/soubi/kaiteki02.html
Please look at the second illustration from the top.
Does No. 1 sound OK? No. 2 is my sentence.
1. Small, rear ashtrays are located in the armrests of both rear doors. To open an ashtray, pivot the lid up.
2. There is an ashtray on each of the rear door armrests. To open its lid, flip it up.
Please look at the second illustration from the top.
Does No. 1 sound OK? No. 2 is my sentence.
1. Small, rear ashtrays are located in the armrests of both rear doors. To open an ashtray, pivot the lid up.
2. There is an ashtray on each of the rear door armrests. To open its lid, flip it up.
Top answer
Your sentence is clearer, shorter, and in the active voice. It's definitely superior to the second.
- Your sentence is clearer, shorter, and in the active voice.
- It's definitely superior to the second.
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Your sentence is clearer, shorter, and in the active voice. It's definitely superior to the second.
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Hi taiwandave,
Thank you.
The second one is mine, but the first one is not.
Thank you.
The second one is mine, but the first one is not.
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Sorry - what I'd meant to write was:
Your sentence is clearer, shorter, and in the active voice. It's definitely superior to the first one.
Your sentence is clearer, shorter, and in the active voice. It's definitely superior to the first one.
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