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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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correct english
Which is correct?
Robert took out his phone and waked arounf the car taking pictures of the damage.
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Robert took out his phone, walked around the car and took pictures of the damage.
Robert took out his phone and waked arounf the car taking pictures of the damage.
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Robert took out his phone, walked around the car and took pictures of the damage.
Top answer
If you correct the typos in the first sentence, they're both okay. [ walked around ]
- If you correct the typos in the first sentence, they're both okay.
- [ walked around ]
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If you correct the typos in the first sentence, they're both okay. [ walked around ]
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Robert took out his phone and walked around the car taking pictures of the damage.
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Robert took out his phone, walked around the car and took pictures of the damage.
Both are correct.
#1 makes it clearer that the actions of walking and talking were concurrent.
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Robert took out his phone, walked around the car and took pictures of the damage.
Both are correct.
#1 makes it clearer that the actions of walking and talking were concurrent.
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Clive#1 makes it clearer that the actions of walking and talking were concurrent.Talking? Do you mean taking pictures?
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khoffTalking? Do you mean taking pictures?Dang! I hate when that happens to me. Fix one error and introduce another. Some days it's like trying to juggle chain saws.
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CliveYes, taking, not talking.Careless me.Thanks, Khoff.If I had $10 for every typo I've made here, you'd be finding me on a private island.
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PhilipIf I had $10 for every typo I've made here, you'd be finding me on a private island.What kind of rent are you charging for that little grass shack at the back of the property?
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