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Srinivas sunki Posted 9 years ago
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Dear Sir,

As per information from Al Khor Labor Camp-1, Today Morning when I am ready for come to office that time Light Driver Mr. Rahman told me from worker Villa Four Gas Cylinder stolen, Night time Its happened, we inquired to Camp Cleaner he said 1:30 AM he went for Sleeping after they don’t know what happen at Camp, may be some outside people inter inside camp & took Three Cylinder from Camp, I want to know who will be bear this type of happen because it’s not mistaken from Camp Maintenance or Cleaner.

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Dear Mr [surname] This morning when I came to work at Al Khor Labor Camp 1, the light driver Mr. Rahman told me that four gas cylinders were stolen from the workers' villa last night. We talked to the camp cleaner, who said that he went to bed at 1:30 AM and doesn't know what happened.

  • Dear Mr [surname] This morning when I came to work at Al Khor Labor Camp 1, the light driver Mr.
  • Rahman told me that four gas cylinders were stolen from the workers' villa last night.
  • We talked to the camp cleaner, who said that he went to bed at 1:30 AM and doesn't know what happened.
  • Maybe some outsiders entered the camp and took them.
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Dear Mr [surname]

This morning when I came to work at Al Khor Labor Camp 1, the light driver Mr. Rahman told me that four gas cylinders were stolen from the workers' villa last night. We talked to the camp cleaner, who said that he went to bed at 1:30 AM and doesn't know what happened. Maybe some outsiders entered the camp and took them.

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