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Sumejja Essidiri Posted 13 years ago
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After he moved back with his family, he was quite surprised by many changes that he analysed in a book. In the opening chapter Bryson stated his opinion about America and American’s life style after being away for twenty years. Throughout this book Bryson talks about trivial stuff, such as junk food, room service, American obsession with rules and other similar things. In the same time he makes it look like he is talking about the most important things in the world. Most of the time he complained and in some way judged some things regarded as American. While making fun of Americans in the same time he made fun of himself too and we can see this in chapter “Gardening With My Wife” where he showed his incompetence about gardening. He also pointed some facts that I did not know before. For example in chapter “So Sue Me” he pointed the fact that America had in 1998 more lawyers than all the rest nations together. At the very end Bryson in some way expressed some kind of regret for leaving England. Even thought he mentioned at the end things he liked in America it could not cover up his longing for old home.
After he moved back with his family, he was quite surprised by many changes that he analysed in a book. In the opening chapter Bryson stated his opinion about America and American’s life style after being away for twenty years. Throughout this book Bryson talks about trivial stuff, such as junk food, room service, American obsession with rules and other similar things. In the same time he makes it look like he is talking about the most important things in the world. Most of the time he complained and in some way judged some things regarded as American. While making fun of Americans in the same time he made fun of himself too and we can see this in chapter “Gardening With My Wife” where he showed his incompetence about gardening. He also pointed some facts that I did not know before. For example in chapter “So Sue Me” he pointed the fact that America had in 1998 more lawyers than all the rest nations together. At the very end Bryson in some way expressed some kind of regret for leaving England. Even thought he mentioned at the end things he liked in America it could not cover up his longing for old home.
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can you look at my work and correct pos s ible mistakes ? T hanks in advance . After he moved back with his family, he was quite surprised by the many changes that he analyse s in a the book.
- can you look at my work and correct pos s ible mistakes ?
- T hanks in advance .
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hii ..can you look at my work and correct possible mistakes? Thanks in advance.
After he moved back with his family, he was quite surprised by the many changes that
After he moved back with his family, he was quite surprised by the many changes that
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thank you so much this is last part hope you van correct this too:)
Bryson succeeded in something that most of writers fail and that is capturing readers’ attention throught whole reading. His way of retelling things is hilarious and interesting. I could not stop myself from laughing almost the whole time. He questioned some things that I would never bother to notice, and because of that I bec
Bryson succeeded in something that most of writers fail and that is capturing readers’ attention throught whole reading. His way of retelling things is hilarious and interesting. I could not stop myself from laughing almost the whole time. He questioned some things that I would never bother to notice, and because of that I bec
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Thank you so much. This is last part, I hope you can correct this too:)
Bryson succeeded in something that mostof writers fail at,
Bryson succeeded in something that most
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