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LouiST Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing
Correct a review "The Last Song"
Hi everyone
I have to write a review for tomorrow about "The Last Song" written by Nicholas Sparks.
I have already done that, but I would be grateful if anybody could correct it... and you may give me like a little feedback of what I could have done better
Here it is:
No New York anymore; Ronnie’s going to stay with her father, the man she hasn’t talked to since a divorce. For Ronnie inconceivable. But as soon as she gets to know Will, everything changes. Her fate takes it course. A touching story about first love and family written by Nicholas Sparks.
Thanks!
I have to write a review for tomorrow about "The Last Song" written by Nicholas Sparks.
I have already done that, but I would be grateful if anybody could correct it... and you may give me like a little feedback of what I could have done better
Here it is:
No New York anymore; Ronnie’s going to stay with her father, the man she hasn’t talked to since a divorce. For Ronnie inconceivable. But as soon as she gets to know Will, everything changes. Her fate takes it course. A touching story about first love and family written by Nicholas Sparks.
Thanks!
Top answer
Already changed: Ronnie's going to spend the summer with her father. Anything else?
- Already changed: Ronnie's going to spend the summer with her father.
- Anything else?
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Already changed: Ronnie's going to spend the summer with her father.
Anything else?
Anything else?
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*Her fate takes ITS courses. Haha I should have read it a second time before I posted it.. 
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