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"Those who think this disease is a simple flu and who are still roaming outside without giving a thought no matter how young you are, I hope you don't get chocked to death with a tube down your throat, I hope you don't experience the horror of being breathless, I hope you don't have to see your loved ones be buried alone without any family member near them, I hope you don't be the cause of hundreds of people's deaths." Is this sentence correct?
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anonymous Is this sentence correct? You are pushing the limit of how many clauses you can list with bare commas, and in case you don't realize it, the whole thing comes off as vicious, strident irony. It means that you do want me to experience those things unless I obey you.
- anonymous Is this sentence correct?
- You are pushing the limit of how many clauses you can list with bare commas, and in case you don't realize it, the whole thing comes off as vicious, strident irony.
- It means that you do want me to experience those things unless I obey you.
- It is a perfect illustration of the intolerant fanatical mindset that historically has always brought the holocaust.
- It is actually quite good once the mistakes have been corrected.
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anonymous Is this sentence correct?
You are pushing the limit of how many clauses you can list with bare commas, and in case you don't realize it, the whole thing comes off as vicious, strident irony. It means that you do want me to experience those things unless I obey you. It is a perfect illustration of the intolerant fanatical mindset that historically
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