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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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"Forty years from now, it won't matter how my hair looked, how popular I was, what shoes I wore, what car I drove or what kind of house I lived in. What will matter is your unforgettable mark you've left on me by touching my heart and life forever." Is this sentence correct?

  

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"Forty years from now, it won't matter how my hair looked, how popular I was, what shoes I wore, what car I drove or what kind of house I lived in. " A couple of things: Forty years ago for me, all those things still matter. "Unforgettable" is sort of redundant—say what kind of mark it is.

  • "Forty years from now, it won't matter how my hair looked, how popular I was, what shoes I wore, what car I drove or what kind of house I lived in.
  • " A couple of things: Forty years ago for me, all those things still matter.
  • "Unforgettable" is sort of redundant—say what kind of mark it is.
  • As you have it, you could be taking about harm she did you.
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"Forty years from now, it won't matter how my hair looked, how popular I was, what shoes I wore, what car I drove or what kind of house I lived in. What will matter forever is the unforgettable mark you've left on me by touching my heart and my life."

A couple of things:

Forty years ago for me, all those things still matter.

"Unforgettable" is sort of red

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"Forty years from now, it won't matter how my hair looked, how popular I was, what shoes I wore, what car I drove or what kind of house I lived in. What will matter is the your unforgettable mark you've left on me by touching my heart and life forever."

Is this sentence correct? See above.

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