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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Hi, will you check for me if this sentence is correct

As they sat eating at the dining table in awkward silence the problems between them suddenly felt very evident.

  

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anonymous Hi, will you check for me if this sentence is correct As they were eating at the dining table in awkward silence , the prob l ems between them became evident. I think this sounds better.

  • anonymous Hi, will you check for me if this sentence is correct As they were eating at the dining table in awkward silence , the prob l ems between them became evident.
  • I think this sounds better.
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anonymous

Hi, will you check for me if this sentence is correct

As they were eating at the dining table in awkward silence, the problems between them became evident.

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