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Kiokio Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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hi every body i wrote an essay but i do not know its correct or not.
pls help me about that:
the book was imporatant to me was " family law "
it's important to me for some reason:
i'm a young man and a man in my age need marry and before marry i should know about my leagal responsiblity , the book explain what's the
man responsiblity for his wife and childs and it could develop my mind about my future wife, for example husband must pay alimony to his wife
, but most important Feature of this book for me is :
it could give me up from marry becuase i will not doing the legal
  

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Hello kiokio, what was your prompt/question for writing that text? Were you given a word limit?

  • Hello kiokio, what was your prompt/question for writing that text?
  • Were you given a word limit?
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Hello kiokio, what was your prompt/question for writing that text? Were you given a word limit?
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Hi everybody, I wrote an essay the following, but I do not know if it's correct or not.
Please help me with it. about that:
The book that was important to me was "Family Law."
It's important to me for some several reasons.
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Tanx alot ,
i mean , the book regret me, before read , i liked to marry but after read , i do not like wife ):
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But the most important aspect of this book for me is that it has made me reconsider whether I'm ready for marriage at this stage.
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I wrote it again , i think it's ok.
The book that was important to me was “ kinds of husband “
The book explain about 2 kinds of husband:
An emotionally husband who makes a detailed map of his wife's world. He keeps in
touch with his admiration and convey his respect to her and also tends to be an outstanding father.
The other kind of husband and father is a very sad story. He

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