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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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"She should be more popular instead of stupid kids without talent are conquering the music world"
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Anonymous "She should be more popular instead of [stupid kids without talent are conquering the music world]" Your sentence wanders after "instead of". You have a whole sentence after that, which I've placed in brackets. We don't connect one sentence to another with "instead of" in English.
- Anonymous "She should be more popular instead of [stupid kids without talent are conquering the music world]" Your sentence wanders after "instead of".
- You have a whole sentence after that, which I've placed in brackets.
- We don't connect one sentence to another with "instead of" in English.
- I think you mean this: I'm surprised that she's not more popular considering that there are so many kids without talent who have achieved great success in the music world.
- CJ
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Anonymous"She should be more popular instead of [stupid kids without talent are conquering the music world]"Your sentence wanders after "instead of". You have a whole sentence after that, which I've placed in brackets. We don't connect one sentence to another with "instead of" in English.
I think you mean this:
I'm surprised that she's
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