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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
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"When he saw that he was angry, his eyebrows frowned, his lips quivering."
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It is too ambiguous for my sensibilities.
- It is too ambiguous for my sensibilities.
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AnonymousI mean is it correct gramatically?Technically, barely. It is quite awful stylistically. The pronouns are ambiguous, and eyebrows don't frown, people do.
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AnonymousWhen he saw that he was angryNote that "he" means any male, so it's impossible to tell whether one or two males are involved. Use names to keep your meanings clear. For example,
When Tom saw that Mike was angry, ...
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