Hi I like the sense of it, that's good. People do write 'everytime' but I would put it as two words; the second vowel in immediately is an 'e'. You don't need the capital 'U' for 'used' - Every time he would come out with a new song, I would buy it immediately and make a music video and also I would buy the song over and over again so they would reach number one; this is how crazy I used to be about him.
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