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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Everytime he would come out with a new song, I would buy it immidiately and make a music video and also I would buy the song over and over again so they would reach number one; this is how crazy I Used to be about him.
  

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Hi I like the sense of it, that's good. People do write 'everytime' but I would put it as two words; the second vowel in immediately is an 'e'. You don't need the capital 'U' for 'used' - Every time he would come out with a new song, I would buy it immediately and make a music video and also I would buy the song over and over again so they would reach number one; this is how crazy I used to be about him.

  • Hi I like the sense of it, that's good.
  • People do write 'everytime' but I would put it as two words; the second vowel in immediately is an 'e'.
  • You don't need the capital 'U' for 'used' - Every time he would come out with a new song, I would buy it immediately and make a music video and also I would buy the song over and over again so they would reach number one; this is how crazy I used to be about him.
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I like the sense of it, that's good. People do write 'everytime' but I would put it as two words; the second vowel in immediately is an 'e'. You don't need the capital 'U' for 'used'

- Every time he would come out with a new song, I would buy it immediately and make a music video and also I would buy the song over and over again so they would reach number one; this is how c

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