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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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"He becomes the audience, shaking their hands, letting hem sings and he dancing, dancing on the sate, his heels hard on the floor." Is this sentence correct?
  

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There are lots of mistakes, and it is hard to understand what you are trying to say.
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Can I say only "He becomes the audience, shaking their hands, letting them sing"?
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Anonymous Can I say only "He becomes the audience, shaking their hands, letting them sing"?
"He becomes the audience" is an unusual thing to say. Can you explain what you mean by that? In what way does he "become" the audience?
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