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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Does the following sentence make sense?
"--he sighs at her stubbornness and the way her name tumblers from his lips makes her gasp."
"--he sighs at her stubbornness and the way her name tumblers from his lips makes her gasp."
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It would benefit from a comma after "stubbornness". I assume "tumblers" should read "tumbles". If it is supposed to be a sentence then it should start with a capital letter.
- It would benefit from a comma after "stubbornness".
- I assume "tumblers" should read "tumbles".
- If it is supposed to be a sentence then it should start with a capital letter.
- "makes her gasp" is rather unexpected after "stubbornness".
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It would benefit from a comma after "stubbornness". I assume "tumblers" should read "tumbles". If it is supposed to be a sentence then it should start with a capital letter. "makes her gasp" is rather unexpected after "stubbornness".
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