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Hammerman1 Posted 15 years ago
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Then, came reports that the concert had been cancelled after the angry fans thrashed the equipment.

Then, after the angry fans thrashed the equipment, came reports that the concert had been cancelled.

Is this sentence alright?

Thanks.
  

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Hi, trashed, not 'thrashed'. Then, came reports that the concert had been cancelled after the angry fans thrashed the equipment. I'd remove the comma.

  • Hi, trashed, not 'thrashed'.
  • Then, came reports that the concert had been cancelled after the angry fans thrashed the equipment.
  • I'd remove the comma.
  • Then, after the angry fans thrashed the equipment, came reports that the concert had been cancelled.
  • Fine.
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Hi,

trashed, not 'thrashed'.

Then, came reports that the concert had been cancelled after the angry fans thrashed the equipment.

I'd remove the comma.


Then, after the angry fans thrashed the equipment, came reports that the concert had been cancelled.

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Hi,

Then, after the angry fans damaged the equipment, it was said in the reports that the concert had been cancelled.

Regards
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Hi,

Shouldn't it be - Then, after the angry fans trashed the equipment, came reports that the concert was cancelled
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Rahul2689Hi,

Shouldn't it be - Then, after the angry fans trashed the equipment, came reports that the concert was cancelled
The reports came after the cancellation, so you probably have to use past perfect.
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Hi,

Shouldn't it be - Then, after the angry fans trashed the equipment, came reports that the concert was cancelled

Both tenses are fine. 'Had been' is more emphatic about the fact that the cancellation was before some other event. However, in both cases it is unclear what that event was. It may have been either the trashing, or the coming of
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How about this?

Then, after the angry fans had trashed the equipment, came reports that the concert was cancelled
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Hi,

It is possible, but it's much more idiomatic to use the past perfect here.

Regards
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Then, after the angry fans had trashed the equipment, came reports that the concert had been cancelled.

Does this sentence solve the confusion as to the order of the events or does it just make the order unclearer?

1. Equipment trashed

2. Concert cancelled

3. Reports came

Then, after the angry fans trashed the equipment, came reports that
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Hi,

The events are

the coming

the trashing

the cancelling

What sequence of these are you trying to describe to the reader?

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