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XHealthY Posted 17 years ago
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Yes, I will most likely be avoiding refined carbs, sugars, bad fats, and lots of ingredient.
As long as I eat healthy, I should be alright? Because I've decided to save $100 every week.
College is expensive. Furthermore, I need to save money.
It's worth it to pay for college and buy healthy food! I work for a better future and to take care of myself.
As long as I eat healthy, I should be alright? Because I've decided to save $100 every week.
College is expensive. Furthermore, I need to save money.
It's worth it to pay for college and buy healthy food! I work for a better future and to take care of myself.
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Do you mean this as a continuous text, or is it a series of individual sentences that you want checked? If the former then it seems jerky and the connection between eating healthily and saving money is not made very clear. Yes, I will most likely be avoiding refined carbs, sugars, bad fats, and lots of other ingredients .
- Do you mean this as a continuous text, or is it a series of individual sentences that you want checked?
- If the former then it seems jerky and the connection between eating healthily and saving money is not made very clear.
- Yes, I will most likely be avoiding refined carbs, sugars, bad fats, and lots of other ingredients .
- As long as I eat healthily , I should be all right ?
- Because I've decided to save $100 every week.
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Do you mean this as a continuous text, or is it a series of individual sentences that you want checked? If the former then it seems jerky and the connection between eating healthily and saving money is not made very clear.
Yes, I will most likely be avoiding refined carbs, sugars, bad fats, and lots of other ingredients.
As long as I eat healthily,
Yes, I will most likely be avoiding refined carbs, sugars, bad fats, and lots of other ingredients.
As long as I eat healthily,
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Thanks. I've been going out lately, so I didn't read much or study. I'm reading this book called Sundays at Tiffany's which is an awesome book, and easy to learn grammar.
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