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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Hi,
"Make up to your mind foryourself what you 'need' and will use the more, if you already have a desktop that is still running smoothly why buy a laptop? I'd say buy a PS3/XBOX360 and wait a lil bit more for the new collection of laptops to come out, you'd get a better laptop for the same price you'd buy one now"

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Hi, "Make up to your mind foryourself what you 'need' and will use the more, if you already have a desktop that is still running smoothly why buy a laptop? I'd say buy a PS3/XBOX360 and wait a lil bit more for the new collection of laptops to come out, you'd get a better laptop for the same price you'd buy one now" "Make up to your mind for yourself about what you 'need' and will use more. If you already have a desktop that is still running smoothly, why buy a laptop?

  • Hi, "Make up to your mind foryourself what you 'need' and will use the more, if you already have a desktop that is still running smoothly why buy a laptop?
  • I'd say buy a PS3/XBOX360 and wait a lil bit more for the new collection of laptops to come out, you'd get a better laptop for the same price you'd buy one now" "Make up to your mind for yourself about what you 'need' and will use more.
  • If you already have a desktop that is still running smoothly, why buy a laptop?
  • I'd say buy a PS3/XBOX360 and wait a little bit longer for the new collection of laptops to come out.
  • " Clive
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Hi,

"Make up to your mind foryourself what you 'need' and will use the more, if you already have a desktop that is still running smoothly why buy a laptop? I'd say buy a PS3/XBOX360 and wait a lil bit more for the new collection of laptops to come out, you'd get a better laptop for the same price you'd buy one now"

"Make up to your mind for yourself
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"Make up to (the ‘to’ is not necessary) your mind for (space required after ‘for’) yourself what you 'need' and will use the more (the underlined clause doesn’t make sense or doesn’t sound natural?), (This is a ‘comma splice’. Start a new sentence if possible.) if (possibly ‘If’ with a capital letter ‘I’.’If’ might not even be n

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