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Contiluo Posted 12 years ago
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Coral Island

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On the fourth day, we headed to go snorkeling in Coral Island. With a speedboat, we went directly to enjoy a day on the beach and in the water. A beautiful white sandy beach, colorful coral reef just off the shore, amazing marine life is what awaits us at Coral Island. We went snorkeling and it's so amazing to see the corals and fishes swimming below us.
  

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On the fourth day we headed directly to Coral Island in a speedboat to enjoy a day on the beach and in the water. A beautiful white sandy beach, a colorful coral reef just off shore, and amazing marine life awaited us. Once we arrived, we went snorkeling.

  • On the fourth day we headed directly to Coral Island in a speedboat to enjoy a day on the beach and in the water.
  • A beautiful white sandy beach, a colorful coral reef just off shore, and amazing marine life awaited us.
  • Once we arrived, we went snorkeling.
  • The corals we saw were amazing, as were the fish swimming below us.
  • CJ
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On the fourth day we headed directly to Coral Island in a speedboat to enjoy a day on the beach and in the water. A beautiful white sandy beach, a colorful coral reef just off shore, and amazing marine life awaited us. Once we arrived, we went snorkeling. The corals we saw were amazing, as were the fish swimming below us.

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