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RIP Posted 21 years ago
Grammar

coordinating conjunction "and"

0I have a question on the usage of optional words such as "that" and "to" that accompany the conjunction "and".02br
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00Please look at the two sentences below:02br
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00"00I am writing to inform you that I am not an American and I do not have an American wife."02br
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00"00I am writing to inform you that I am not an American and that I do not have an American wife."02br
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00Which is a better style of writing? 02br
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00Here is a similar comparison:02br
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00"She is determined to work diligently and live independently"02br
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00"She is determined to diligently and to live independently."02br
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00Any suggestions as to which writing style is preferred in formal writing?02br
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00Thank you.02br
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"12br 12br 10Which is a better style of writing? 12br 12br 11font 101. First sentence is not good.

  • "12br 12br 10Which is a better style of writing?
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  • First sentence is not good.
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  • The first sentence is fine; the second has a "split infinitive".
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01cite10RIP12cite10I have a question on the usage of optional words such as "that" and "to" that accompany the conjunction "and".12br
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10"10I am writing to inform you that I am not an American and I do not have an American wife."12br
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00I apologize, the second sentence in the second part should have said:02br
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00"She is determined to 01b00work02b00 diligently and to live independently." There is no split infinitive (s00ome say it's good practice to avoid split infinitives, but I have heard frequently that many scholars do not mind them as long
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"I am writing to inform you that I am not an American and I do not have an American wife."

I don't see anything wrong with the above sentence.

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The first example of each sentence is how a native English speaker would say and write it.

"Star Trek" set the trend in split infinitives: "To boldly go where no man has gone before."

It makes me cringe, but everyone does it.

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