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Kumenglish Posted 6 years ago
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Conveying

In the context: We have explained graphic designer the idea of our ad design for the perfume. But the output is not fine.


There are lots of changes required in the advertisement design that you sent. Significantly, the ad design could not conveying our core idea of the product(perfume) as discussed.


is "The ad design could not conveying our core idea" suitable?

  

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kumenglish Significantly, the ad design could not conveying our core idea of the product(perfume) as discussed. The most significant problem is that this ad, as designed, does not convey the core idea of the product that we discussed. That is, sophisticated elegance with a twinge of tragedy, as depicted by the ballet, Swan Lake or the play, Romeo and Juliet.

  • kumenglish Significantly, the ad design could not conveying our core idea of the product(perfume) as discussed.
  • The most significant problem is that this ad, as designed, does not convey the core idea of the product that we discussed.
  • That is, sophisticated elegance with a twinge of tragedy, as depicted by the ballet, Swan Lake or the play, Romeo and Juliet.
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kumenglishSignificantly, the ad design could not conveying our core idea of the product(perfume) as discussed.

The most significant problem is that this ad, as designed, does not convey the core idea of the product that we discussed. That is, sophisticated elegance with a twinge of tragedy, as depicted by the ballet, Swan Lake or the play, Romeo and

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