Conversion from non-native to native English
Could you possibly, as a native English speaker, suggest changes to the following report by a non-native reporter, to convert it into native English?
A 32 year old man was murdered by his three brothers and a man who works with their family business at a locality on Saturday. Police registered an offence against the brothers along with the worker.
It is learnt that the victim whose family is in scrap business and selling chicken, was struck on his leg with a stick by his younger brother following a tiff among brothers. The worker was also present when the fight started. It is learnt that the victim habitually consumed liquor and created a ruckus. He was under influence of alcohol when he picked up a fight with his brothers, with whom he had strained relations.
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A 32-year-old man was murdered by his three brothers and a man who works with their family busin ess on Saturday. Police charged the brothers and the worker. It was learned that the victi m, whose family is in the scrap and chicken business, was struck on the leg with a stick* by his younger brother following an argument among the brothers.
- A 32-year-old man was murdered by his three brothers and a man who works with their family busin ess on Saturday.
- Police charged the brothers and the worker.
- It was learned that the victi m, whose family is in the scrap and chicken business, was struck on the leg with a stick* by his younger brother following an argument among the brothers.
- The worker was also present when the fight starte d.
- The victim habitually consumed liquor and created a ruckus.
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A 32-year-old man was murdered by his three brothers and a man who works with their family business on Saturday. Police charged the brothers and the worker.
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