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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Conversation amongst friends, how to make it natural?

This is for a script, to give a detailed of the scene, is there anything you'd change sp it reads better.

I spilt some water on my bed, exactly where my head lies/I lie my head, so I cover the wet spot with a cloth because it's too wet for me to put your head there. Even with the cloth, my face can feel the cold/the wetness/the moisture through the cloth. In fact it felt so uncomfortable having my head there that I turned around and slept the other way.

Here in this scene 2 friends are going on about:

As a guy, it's easy to say « had I been a girl I'd want to look like this and like that » but had you really been a girl, I don't think you would have wanted to look like your fantasy girl.

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