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Quaerereverum Posted 14 years ago
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Contributes to development

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Art contributes to development of the concentration. For example, when a kid tries to make a car using clay, his first attempt may end up failure, but he doesn't give up and finally after several attempts, he made it. So, the kid will learn to focus on complicated tasks in the future until he gets the desirable results.

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Hello quaereeverum, Below are my suggestions. Is my phrases correct? Are my sentences and phrases correct?

  • Hello quaereeverum, Below are my suggestions.
  • Is my phrases correct?
  • Are my sentences and phrases correct?
  • Art contributes to the development of concentration.
  • For example, when a child tries to make a car using clay, his first attempt may end up in failure .
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Hello quaereeverum,
Below are my suggestions.

Is my phrases correct? Are my sentences and phrases correct?

Art contributes to the development of concentration. For example, when a child tries to make a car using clay, his first attempt may end up
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Merci JohnParis( in Farsi we say merci). I'm truly thankful. Emotion: smile
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Do you really say "merci" for "thank you" in Farsi? Wow!
Very interesting, indeed. Thanks for teaching me something new today!
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