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Fizzi Posted 20 years ago
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Since then, Medicines Australia has strengthen the code by reviewing several times and some changes have been made such as an addition of monitoring mechanism which proactively monitor selected promotional material on regular and ongoing basis. Recent code also has imposed new sanction for companies that violate the code and complaint procedure for alleged breaches . An independent study is needed to assess the compliance of advertisements with the updated code of conducts because voluntary codes tend to be reactive and does not attempt to prevent breaches from occurring in the first place. Also, I am unable to identify any study conducted that has examined the quality of pharmaceutical advertising in Malaysia. A research in Malaysia is crucial considering that Malaysia does not have a national formulary that provides health professionals with an independent and up-to-date source of drug information to support rational prescribing. Therefore, doctors in Malaysia may rely even more and influence more on pharmaceutical promotion.

Regards,

Dean

  

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Hi, Dean Good essay. Here are my ideas. ) Since then, Medicines Australia has strengthen ed the code by reviewing it several times and m aking some changes , including the addition have been made such as an addition of a monitoring mechanism which proactively monitor s selected promotional material on a regular and ongoing basis.

— Nef

  • Hi, Dean Good essay.
  • Here are my ideas.
  • ) Since then, Medicines Australia has strengthen ed the code by reviewing it several times and m aking some changes , including the addition have been made such as an addition of a monitoring mechanism which proactively monitor s selected promotional material on a regular and ongoing basis.
  • The R r ecent code also has imposed new sanction s for companies that violate the code , and has introduced a complaint procedure for alleged breaches.
  • An independent study is needed to assess the compliance of advertisements with the updated code of conduct s because voluntary codes tend to be reactive and do es not attempt to prevent breaches from occurring in the first place.
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Hi, Dean

Good essay. Here are my ideas. (Also, did you want "context" instead of "contex"?)

Since then, Medicines Australia has strengthened the code by reviewing it several times and making some changes, including the addition have been made such as an additio
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Hi Nef,

Thanks for your comments. It really help me a lot. Sorry it was a typo...should be "context" not "contex".

Regards,
Dean
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