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BAYRAM ERDEM Posted 12 years ago
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Could you please help me correct and shorten the following sentence?
(My sentence below contains some words that some readers may find disturbing.)
''Today is versus me. I went to the loo and peed a half litres. Just before I flushed, my ring got its way right into the water closet. I can't believe myself I had to submerge my hand to get it lift it up. I lost count as to how much I washed my hands with bleach (hypochlorite)''
Could you please help me correct and shorten the following sentence?
(My sentence below contains some words that some readers may find disturbing.)
''Today is versus me. I went to the loo and peed a half litres. Just before I flushed, my ring got its way right into the water closet. I can't believe myself I had to submerge my hand to get it lift it up. I lost count as to how much I washed my hands with bleach (hypochlorite)''
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Today just isn't my day. I went to the loo and peed half a liter. As I was about to fush, my ring somehow fell into the bowl.
- Today just isn't my day.
- I went to the loo and peed half a liter.
- As I was about to fush, my ring somehow fell into the bowl.
- I can't believe that I had to dip my hand in to retrieve it.
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Today just isn't my day. I went to the loo and peed half a liter. As I was about to fush, my ring somehow fell into the bowl. I can't believe that I had to dip my hand in to retrieve it.
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