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Are these two sentences worded and structured correctly? Caramon was reunited with Raistlin for a brief time later that year, prior to Chaos being defeated by the valiant efforts of Palin, Tasslehoff, Steel, and the young woman Usha. After the Chaos War, Palin and Usha were married and had a son and a daughter together, Ulin and Linsha, while Caramon and Tika’s daughters grew up without their eldest brothers.