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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Considering my blog's sub-title. gimme an advise
hello there... I'm bella...
go to the point...
I'm about gonna build a weblog about fashion, photography, and modelling (especially for this one).
containing pictures of photography, ad campaign, editorials... but discussing about the models of those projects.
Well i know i'm having a little problem with my english... so i think i'm only gonna write the blog in my native language French or Italian. But maybe with some english slipped
But currently i'm getting confused while considering its sub-title.
I think i will name the blog "cliché mannequin"
and the confusion is the subtitle (the sentence following under the main title) I want it in english.
so far what i can get is:
"Eye candy of the eye catchy world"
Is the sentence above written correctly?
My point in this sentence is "eye candy" represents the "model" and "eye catchy world" represents everything which are connected with fashion world such as "Fashion/Couture (itself), Magazines, Editorials, Photography, Designs, Ad watch, Ad campaign, etc" .
So the whole sentence should be define as:
all the visually-attractive (eye candy) people (in this case the model) surrounding of the fashion world.
or for example: a model in one of the mag editorial.
so my question is... the sentence that i'm gonna use it as the subtitle.
EYE CANDY OF THE EYE CATCHY WORLD
is this one written correctly
or should I use "the" in the beginning of the sentence.
use "s" for eye candies, and using dash for eye-catchy.
please give an advice or solution... thanks
go to the point...
I'm about gonna build a weblog about fashion, photography, and modelling (especially for this one).
containing pictures of photography, ad campaign, editorials... but discussing about the models of those projects.
Well i know i'm having a little problem with my english... so i think i'm only gonna write the blog in my native language French or Italian. But maybe with some english slipped
But currently i'm getting confused while considering its sub-title.
I think i will name the blog "cliché mannequin"
and the confusion is the subtitle (the sentence following under the main title) I want it in english.
so far what i can get is:
"Eye candy of the eye catchy world"
Is the sentence above written correctly?
My point in this sentence is "eye candy" represents the "model" and "eye catchy world" represents everything which are connected with fashion world such as "Fashion/Couture (itself), Magazines, Editorials, Photography, Designs, Ad watch, Ad campaign, etc" .
So the whole sentence should be define as:
all the visually-attractive (eye candy) people (in this case the model) surrounding of the fashion world.
or for example: a model in one of the mag editorial.
so my question is... the sentence that i'm gonna use it as the subtitle.
EYE CANDY OF THE EYE CATCHY WORLD
is this one written correctly
or should I use "the" in the beginning of the sentence.
use "s" for eye candies, and using dash for eye-catchy.
please give an advice or solution... thanks
Top answer
You're asking about correct grammar, yet use the word 'gonna' Let me assure you, anyone who CONTINUES to read a blog after encountering the word 'gonna' doesn't care about grammar. Among English native speakers, anyone who writes the word 'gonna' hasn't anything to say worth reading; which gives you an idea about your potential devoted readers! Bella : try to say, and write, 'going to' - you won't scare away the uneducated, and will retain respect for your written thoughts with the rest!
- You're asking about correct grammar, yet use the word 'gonna' Let me assure you, anyone who CONTINUES to read a blog after encountering the word 'gonna' doesn't care about grammar.
- Among English native speakers, anyone who writes the word 'gonna' hasn't anything to say worth reading; which gives you an idea about your potential devoted readers!
- Bella : try to say, and write, 'going to' - you won't scare away the uneducated, and will retain respect for your written thoughts with the rest!
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You're asking about correct grammar, yet use the word 'gonna'
Let me assure you, anyone who CONTINUES to read a blog after encountering the word 'gonna' doesn't care about grammar.
Among English native speakers, anyone who writes the word 'gonna' hasn't anything to say worth reading; which gives you an idea about your potential devoted readers!
Let me assure you, anyone who CONTINUES to read a blog after encountering the word 'gonna' doesn't care about grammar.
Among English native speakers, anyone who writes the word 'gonna' hasn't anything to say worth reading; which gives you an idea about your potential devoted readers!
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