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PreciousJones Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

consideration

Consideration and civility are key to making a difference

Is this sentence good?

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It's not wrong, but it's vague. Making a difference to what? Clive

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  • Making a difference to what?
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It's not wrong, but it's vague. Making a difference to what?

Clive
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CliveIt's not wrong, but it's vague. Making a difference to what?Clive
Making a difference in our world? Or in our society? Or should it be to our society?

Can I say to our civilization?

Thanks!
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CliveIt's not wrong, but it's vague. Making a difference to what?Clive
Consideration and civility are key to making a difference to/in our civilization.

Should it be to or in?
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CliveI like 'in'.Clive
Consideration and civility are key to making a difference in our civilization.

Is this a good statement? Thank you Clive.
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The grammar is fine.

But 'our civilization' is such a huge concept that it makes it seem a little extreme to suggest that consideration and civility make such a huge difference. But, if that's your opinion.,OK.

Clive
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