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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
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Are the following sentences acceptable?

(1) More and more Japanese women are postpone their marriage, or evern totally refuse marriage.

(2) According to some survey, more than seventy percent of Taiwanese women have considered to be single.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: (1) More and more Japanese women are postpone their marriage , or evern totally refuse marriage. (2) According to some survey , more than seventy percent of Taiwanese women have considered to be single.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: (1) More and more Japanese women are postpone their marriage , or evern totally refuse marriage.
  • (2) According to some survey , more than seventy percent of Taiwanese women have considered to be single.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

(1) More and more Japanese women are postpone their marriage, or evern totally refuse marriage.
(2) According to some survey, more than seventy percent of Taiwanese women have considered to be single.
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(1) More and more Japanese women postpone their marriage, and some others even totally refuse marriage.

(2) According to a survey, more than seventy percent Taiwanese women consider to keep single.
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(1) More and more Japanese women postpone their marriages, and some even forgo marriage.
(2) According to a survey, more than seventy percent of Taiwanese women are considering remaining single.

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