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Peaceblinkfriend Posted 17 years ago
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...conscience of opportunistic muggers would allow.

Hi all

Do these sound natural? Which one is preferred?

The level of guilt which comes with occasioning grievous bodily harm is beyond what opportunists' conscience would allow.

The level of guilt which comes with occasioning grievous bodily harm is beyond what opportunistic muggers' conscience would allow.

The level of guilt which comes with occasioning grievous bodily harm is beyond what the conscience of opportunistic muggers would allow.

Thanks

PBF
  

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I think that the point being made is that some petty criminals will not stoop to using violence. The word 'mugger' is strongly associated with violence. "The level of guilt which comes with occasioning grievous bodily harm is beyond what opportunists' conscience would allow.

  • I think that the point being made is that some petty criminals will not stoop to using violence.
  • The word 'mugger' is strongly associated with violence.
  • "The level of guilt which comes with occasioning grievous bodily harm is beyond what opportunists' conscience would allow.
  • " There are many kinds of opportunist.
  • The mention of grievious bodily harm implies criminals of some kind.
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I think that the point being made is that some petty criminals will not stoop to using violence.
The word 'mugger' is strongly associated with violence.

"The level of guilt which comes with occasioning grievous bodily harm is beyond what opportunists' conscience would allow. "
This is the best, but I would make a slight change:

"The level of guilt which
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Thanks for replying Patrick.

How do we refer to people who threaten others into giving up their valubles like mobile phones or wallet with a knife? The sort of people I want to refer to do just that but they don't actually want to stab their victim. Are they called thieves?

I am not studying law but I am taking Legal Studies at school.

Thank you again

PBF
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PeaceblinkfriendThanks for replying Patrick.

How do we refer to people who threaten others into giving up their valubles like mobile phones or wallet with a knife? The sort of people I want to refer to do just that but they don't actually want to stab their victim. Are they called thieves?

I am not studying law but I am taking Legal Studies at school.
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Thanks for the follow-up Patrick.

So you would refer to the people who threaten you with a knife for your wallet as 'opportunist' right?

I agree with what you said. I am reading about the differring mentality of criminals.

Did you study law?

Thanks again

PBF
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PeaceblinkfriendThanks for the follow-up Patrick.

So you would refer to the people who threaten you with a knife for your wallet as 'opportunist' right?

I agree with what you said. I am reading about the differring mentality of criminals.

Did you study law?

Thanks again

PBF

I am not a lawyer, but

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