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Pooyan Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Connection between two clauses

Hello,

I was wondering if the following sentence is correct grammatically:

"I will graduate in Spring 2013, ranked 1st with the highest GPA in the department"

I mean the connection between the two clauses is correct?

Thanks.
  

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Pooyan I mean the connection between the two clauses is correct? It is unclear and really unnecessary. I suggest: I will graduate in spring 2013 with the highest GPA in the department.

— Mister Micawber

  • Pooyan I mean the connection between the two clauses is correct?
  • It is unclear and really unnecessary.
  • I suggest: I will graduate in spring 2013 with the highest GPA in the department.
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PooyanI mean the connection between the two clauses is correct?
It is unclear and really unnecessary. I suggest:

I will graduate in spring 2013 with the highest GPA in the department.
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