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Tamguatlay Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Connecting and uniting four different organisations into one big family.
Our first Chief Priest was instrumental in connecting and uniting four different organisations into one big family. (If 'family' an appropriate word?)
The above is written by my daughter. I think connecting is redundant because of the word uniting. I have rephrased the sentence as shown below. Am I correct? Thanks.
Our first Chief Priest was instrumental in uniting four different organisations into one big family.
The above is written by my daughter. I think connecting is redundant because of the word uniting. I have rephrased the sentence as shown below. Am I correct? Thanks.
Our first Chief Priest was instrumental in uniting four different organisations into one big family.
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Your sentence is fine, but so is your daughter's sentence if she was thinking of a two-step process—something like two companies' joint venture and subsequent merger.
- Your sentence is fine, but so is your daughter's sentence if she was thinking of a two-step process—something like two companies' joint venture and subsequent merger.
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Your sentence is fine, but so is your daughter's sentence if she was thinking of a two-step process—something like two companies' joint venture and subsequent merger.
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