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Thein Lwin 7291 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

conjunction and punctuation

In addition to pagodas and historical sites, the famous Wat Sisaket Temple with its big Buddha image, the old Hotai library whose walls are covered with sapphires, and wall paintings are well worth seeing.
In the sentence, I don't understand that there is a comma before 'and'. And please check the sentence. Thanks in advance.
  

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There are other problems. My suggestion: In addition to pagodas and historical sites, the famous Wat Sisaket Temple with its big Buddha image and the old Hotai library , whose walls are covered with sapphires and wall paintings , are well worth seeing. The relative clause must be set off with commas unless there is more than one old Hotai library.

— Cool Breeze

  • There are other problems.
  • My suggestion: In addition to pagodas and historical sites, the famous Wat Sisaket Temple with its big Buddha image and the old Hotai library , whose walls are covered with sapphires and wall paintings , are well worth seeing.
  • The relative clause must be set off with commas unless there is more than one old Hotai library.
  • CB
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There are other problems. My suggestion: In addition to pagodas and historical sites, the famous Wat Sisaket Temple with its big Buddha image and the old Hotai library, whose walls are covered with sapphires and wall paintings, are well worth seeing.

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Cool BreezeThere are other problems. My suggestion: In addition to pagodas and historical sites, the famous Wat Sisaket Temple with its big Buddha image and the old Hotai library, whose walls are covered with sapphires and wall paintings, are well worth seeing.The relative clause must be set off with commas unless there is more than one old Hotai library.CB
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